My Favorite Animal

(writtenbychenweicla3grade8)
  ilikeadogbest.it'shaytolivewithadog.
  mydogiscalled"diandian".doyouknowitsmeaning?letmetellyou,it'sbecauseofhishair.iknowyouhavegueedthereason.hehasapairofbigeyes,they'rebeautifulandbright,eeciallyatnight.
  heishonesttous.everytimehehearssomethingwrong,inordertogiveussig,healwaysshouts.heisalsofriendlytous.igotoschooleverytime,healwaysfollowsmetogooutofthehouse,thenhecomesback.thismakesmeknowthetruelovebetweenanimalsandhuma.
  myfavoriteanimalisthedog,heismygoodcompany.(辅导教师顾国)